Reflecting on my writing

I have been learning how to write a character description. This term I have written a piece about Little Red Riding Hood, and another piece about The Big Bad Wolf. I have been using a guide of the features I need to include, and have also focused on varying my sentence beginnings; writing more ‘saturated’ descriptions; and adding extra details as I revise my writing.

I think the main differences between my first and second pieces of writing are that I am now not using he or his for the first word for a sentence and I am saturating my sentences with more descriptions.