Sunday, July 29, 2012

Big Bad

Big Bad

Lurking in the shadows is a big, black-hearted, monsterous wolf.
His coat is a glossy black. Above his long nose is a pair of firey red eyes 
that gleam when a human walks past. Ears prick up from his dreadful hairy head when a feast wanders past.

He sneaks around like a ninja, not leaving a scent behind him.
When you think you have seen something out of the corner of your eye - but 
when you look you actually see nothing - that's The Big bad Wolf.

Crawling through the bushes,  scraping and sharpening his claws, a demonic, evil grin spreads along his dark cruel face.


Bushy eyebrows look like black rims around his horrid evil eyes. His teeth drip with envy after payback. His teeth are a mustard yellow, but there are stains of blood remaining from after a feast.

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  2. Mackenzie what an amazing piece of writing. I love how you read it and could explain why you were using particular words. You are an incredible writer. Keep working hard ! ;) Mum

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